HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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It's that time again!

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[notanemptymotto.livejournal.com]

Helen Magnus • notanemptymotto [Sanctuary]
John Sheppard • gating_across [Stargate SGA]
Peter Petrelli • makeshisownway [Heroes]

My terrible typos aside. /handwaves

[sgmitchell.livejournal.com]

I just said I loved Helen and John! They're very IC IMO (Though I think I missed some of Sanctuary S1, so I feel as if I have some gaping holes in my understanding of the canon)

Peter I have not yet interacted with, but I'd love to some time. (I think the only Heroes pup left out there that I play is Isaac, though, and that's been...awhile...xD)

[notanemptymotto.livejournal.com]

♥ Thank you. Helen is a voice I worry about constantly due to the way she talks, phfff. We just got a bunch more backstory on Helen & John in Season 2, and even more tonight with Haunted. I can list all the episodes you'd need to see. I'm a nerd.

Isaac! He'd shoot Peter again. :(

[sgmitchell.livejournal.com]

I've watched s2 faithfully, at least! :D

That depends D: I have an epic AU!Isaac who would consider Peter an ally.

[notanemptymotto.livejournal.com]

/HIGH 5.

We need an AU glitch.

[beyourhero.livejournal.com]

\o!

We dooo. I ♥ AUs. I'm just not entirely sure my specific AU!Isaac is quite within Taxon's limits XD

[notanemptymotto.livejournal.com]

ONLY ONE WAY TO KNOW.

[beyourhero.livejournal.com]

...True! But! It's very AU. It has a Lyle with an ability. Although I guess that could be changed if need be...

[aregulargirl.livejournal.com]

so much love for all three. i know nothing of helen or sheppard's canon but your peter is pretty spot-on and it's clear that you're very passionate about all of them.

[notanemptymotto.livejournal.com]

I should do a canon review... /eyes her Heroes eps.

[snapples-apples.livejournal.com]

Hooray, Helen! Setting up the Sanctuary is pretty much completely brilliant.

[notanemptymotto.livejournal.com]

SHE IS PLEASED TO KNOW THIS.

[frell-this-dren.livejournal.com]

Crichton would like to point out that his name is Crichton and not Critchon, XD see I didn't mention the typos, Crichton did ;P ♥

As for your characterisations, I can't comment on Peter at all as I've never seen a single episode of Heroes >_<, the other two though - I have seen a few (albeit nowhere nr as many as I should have) and they seem absolutely spot on to me, and always interesting to read/thread with. The Sanctuary was inspired to bring to Taxon and open it up, btw :)

Criticism wise, and it's less a typo issue and more of a grammar issue that you obviously just don't know and we all have to learn it at some point, you usually type 'should of'. 'would of' and 'could of' where it should be 'have' rather than 'of'. That's all I got though, and characterisation and keeping it interesting are far more important than anything else ♥