Okay well first off, you know how much I adore your Lex in a general sense. But to be specific, I really like how you balance caution with curiosity in him, and I'm looking forward to MORE LEX. Especially plotty shenanigans. ♥
Also BLEH, I left out half of what I wanted to say about Lex (ffff brainmush), but BASICALLY. Although I haven't had much contact with him in Taxon I know your Lex very well from museboxes and I can say that he is amazing. He's smart and ambitious but he's also vulnerable too, and you really show how he's a good man put on a bad path. I look forward to seeing you bring out all the subtle layers here in Taxon.
Dan is lovely, I think you have his mild awkwardness and his just basic "nice guy" thing down really well, but he isn't just that, you give him nuances that suggest more. I'd love to see him do something badass in Taxon sometime, to show that side of him. And I adore his interactions with Rorschach especially.
Jason is from a canon I'm not familiar with, so I can't really speak to that aspect, but I really like how he's such a 'guy', and how he's a little goofy and maybe not so bright sometimes, but he's not dumb, and he's not just a goof. I want to see more interactions between him and Sookie (I need to go back and stalk older threads)!
/hopes this all makes sense, words are not totally my friend today X[
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Also BLEH, I left out half of what I wanted to say about Lex (ffff brainmush), but BASICALLY. Although I haven't had much contact with him in Taxon I know your Lex very well from museboxes and I can say that he is amazing. He's smart and ambitious but he's also vulnerable too, and you really show how he's a good man put on a bad path. I look forward to seeing you bring out all the subtle layers here in Taxon.
Dan is lovely, I think you have his mild awkwardness and his just basic "nice guy" thing down really well, but he isn't just that, you give him nuances that suggest more. I'd love to see him do something badass in Taxon sometime, to show that side of him. And I adore his interactions with Rorschach especially.
Jason is from a canon I'm not familiar with, so I can't really speak to that aspect, but I really like how he's such a 'guy', and how he's a little goofy and maybe not so bright sometimes, but he's not dumb, and he's not just a goof. I want to see more interactions between him and Sookie (I need to go back and stalk older threads)!
/hopes this all makes sense, words are not totally my friend today X[