I'm going to skip over Lex, since I'm familiar with the character only in the broadest sense. (Well, and I know HE'S NOT TO BE ALLOWED NEAR CAKES.)
As you're aware, I don't know Jason's canon, but I love how effortlessly you convey how good-natured he is--he may not be a hero in the dramatic, must-save-everyone way, but his eagerness to help people (even if it's just by setting them at ease) comes across in all his tags. I don't really have much in the way of crit--you've done a good job of having him interact with a variety of people, which is nice because you can explore sides of his personality other than "doofus." And I love that he and Loki are rooming together! I think that's just perfect. Oh, and thumbs up on not equating "not the brightest bulb in the box" with "entirely devoid of common sense."
Daaaaaaan--he's still pretty new, but I like what I've seen and I look forward to reading more from our burgeoning Watchmen cast. The one thing I'd like to see is him starting to take notice of or put together all the alternate universe stuff--I'm rusty on the canon, but think the cars in the Watchmenverse are all electric and people smoke pipe-things instead of cigarettes. And, you know, the whole looming threat of nuclear annihilation thing. I appreciate that he's not running around going "WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU NEVER HAD COSTUMED HEROES WHERE YOU'RE FROM" to everyone in sight, but I'd like to get more of a sense that he's coming from a different world.
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As you're aware, I don't know Jason's canon, but I love how effortlessly you convey how good-natured he is--he may not be a hero in the dramatic, must-save-everyone way, but his eagerness to help people (even if it's just by setting them at ease) comes across in all his tags. I don't really have much in the way of crit--you've done a good job of having him interact with a variety of people, which is nice because you can explore sides of his personality other than "doofus." And I love that he and Loki are rooming together! I think that's just perfect. Oh, and thumbs up on not equating "not the brightest bulb in the box" with "entirely devoid of common sense."
Daaaaaaan--he's still pretty new, but I like what I've seen and I look forward to reading more from our burgeoning Watchmen cast. The one thing I'd like to see is him starting to take notice of or put together all the alternate universe stuff--I'm rusty on the canon, but think the cars in the Watchmenverse are all electric and people smoke pipe-things instead of cigarettes. And, you know, the whole looming threat of nuclear annihilation thing. I appreciate that he's not running around going "WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU NEVER HAD COSTUMED HEROES WHERE YOU'RE FROM" to everyone in sight, but I'd like to get more of a sense that he's coming from a different world.