how's my driving?

[taxonmods]

Yes indeed, it has been a while since April. ...two months, in fact. So here we are with another HMD. It would be awesome if everyone participates!

Please comment here with the names of the characters you play and others will reply with their feedback- and it's obviously a given that this feedback will be helpful, constructive and respectful. Also, as amazing as getting ILU comments is, it's nice to hear why and what we're doing right just as much as criticism needs to be constructive.

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Comments

[oppositeofhero.livejournal.com]

oppositeofhero

Anything anyone has to say, I'm all ears. I'm really unsure about my portrayal of Tony, since this is my first time playing him and all. Concerns, suggestions, etc. are very, very much appreciated!

[aworldenchanted]

I really like your Tony so far. His curiosity, and his outward devil-may-care factor make him very interesting, especially in his reactions to Taxon. I'll be waiting to see how you deal with his physical issues here, but on the whole, so far so good? :D

[oppositeofhero.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Ammmy! That's really good to hear. I've been trying to keep the balance between Tony's "haven't got a care in the world" attitude and his concerns regarding his physical health. I'm trying to avoid being too heavy-handed with the angst factor because that gets old, both to play off of and to write.

So yeah, I'm glad you think I'm doing all right so far. ^^

[tamitha]

Echoing Ammmy in saying that I really like what I've seen of your Tony so far. You've got a real great, crisp voice for him with this great narrative that lets us peek into his head. I happily admit to threadstalking and look forward to seeing more of him around! :>

[oppositeofhero.livejournal.com]

Threadstalk away~!

But yes, I'm glad you think I have his voice down. That's one of the things I worry about the most when I'm trying to write him. And, yes, finding the balance between his dialogue and general narrative has always been a bit of a challenge for me. So it's good to know that it's working. Thanks for the comment! ^^

[a-pretty-fire.livejournal.com]

I don't have anything more constructive than 'what they said' to say here, really. You're definitely doing a great job and I can't wait to see where you go next.